Last week we started our discussion on copywriting that’s going to take us through the next few weeks.  To see where we started, visit that blog post below.  On Thursday, I also left you with some Copy Kryptonite.  You can see that post below as well.  Today, we’ll talk about two more copy kryptonite that will kill your copy.  Thanks again to my mentor Bill Glazer who has allowed me us his term Copy Kryptonite.  We’ve talked about being boring, and writing from a ‘me’ perspective. 

Now, another copy killer that I see all too often is BLANK SPACE.  As you can probably tell from the subject line of this email, blank space never sold a thing.  If you can show me where it has, it’ll be the
first time. 

It’s important in all your media, but especially important in places where space is at a premium, such as yellow page ads, and postcards.  You just don’t have a ton of room with either one, so you’ve got to do the most with the real estate you got.  The same goes for your sales letters as well. 

Here’s a tip for you.  If you find you have blank space in any of your advertising, at the very least, fill them up with good, results oriented testimonials.  That’s the least you should be doing with blank space.

The last piece of Copy Kryptonite is placing your logo, business name, address etc above the headline.  This again pertains to any media you use, postcards, sales letters, online, yellow pages etc.  If your advertising does the job that it’s suppose to, you prospect will find the information as long as it’s somewhere to be found.  If you can’t get by without having your name, logo, address on the letter, try putting it across the bottom of each page of a letter or postcard.

So we’ve covered Copy Kryptonite, later this week we’ll get into the nuts and bolts of copywriting.  See you then!

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